Unkown Blogger Pursues a Deranged Quest for Normalcy

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Reality check

Posted by ubpdqn on December 20, 2010

The unknown blogger’s significant other has expressed passionate disappointment in the philosophical rants

To paraphrase (and unfortunately re-commit most of the writing sins):

  • These posts are rambling and circumlocutory.
  • Simple messages are clothed in unnecessarily complex language. This suggests either self-indulgence or self-engrandisement or an inability to communicate at a basic level. 
  •  Some of the multiple strands are not woven together in a coherent comprehensible whole.
  • Perhaps most concerningly some of the posts reflect the unknown blogger’s juxtaposition of difficulty of processing emotion-laden internal conflict with creative writing. Perhaps, there may be  merit in writing as a therapeutic vehicle  but the former should be private and the latter public (if one dares). The composite is a confusing mess. The epithet rant is, therefore, appropriate.

Feedback is a jewel. The unknown blogger while endeavour to ingest and process this feedback.

One Response to “Reality check”

  1. Nelle said

    Glad to see you’ve taken some feedback on board & simplified your format. Try spellcheck & proof reading for grammatical errors next time.

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